I did a bit of editing of this poem. Re-submitted it since I like my new version better. This will likely be the final.
Edits from the first version [Version1 found here
[link] ] Shifted part one S2 to Part III. Changed last line of S1. Cut X stanza and down-shifted original part III. Cut last lines of VI (the current VII)
How is the ending?
You bring so much meaning into your poems.