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Snow from soot-licked skies rests            on frost-edged shadows.
Wind winds at the sill like a cat,            begging in. Bare soles lap at boards.


A black jewel caws and flicks            its folded wings. It sidesteps,
eye on the frosted fields.            You spy the sunrise stretch,
sly, over the brown horizon            and breathe
at dawn-licked spaces            between pillows.   


Eyes greet the crow that crouches,            crooked and craven, lilting on a tree.
Then cold (and crow) are gone            like seasons that slink past;
like winter work mornings            that cannot be avoided.


Extra seconds of fender-to-fender -           chance for thought.
The winking wild-lights, faces (flash&           fade) -


Whisper 'hush' to the world.
©2008-2009 ~SpokenAubade
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Submitted: February 28, 2008
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For the 'I SPY' contest - just some things that you see, country to city.



Thank you, ~StoppedClocks for your support.
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Absolutely lovely as always Naiya. I love the abstract images that fade into concrete. Wonderful, wonderful.

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Nobody tosses a Mandalorian. They have jet packs.

[link] Oya Mando'a! Oya!
clever layout of the stanzas :thumbsup:

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i'll wrap my wire around your heart
and your mind.
Smashing Pumpkins
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You spy the sunrise stretch,
sly, over the brown horizon and breathe
at dawn-licked spaces between pillows."

<3This reminds me an awful lot of a drive I was taking today after school.

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<caveatLECTOR>and jon beat me to uranus LOLOLOL

<concrete-surfer> your mom depreciates in value as she's traded

<intangebility> o man. pink is singing sweet dreams on tv atm, and madeline says "string trees are made of peas?"
:sun: Congratulations! :sun:

This deviation has won third place in the I SPY competition's Poetry category!

You can read all about it here.

Prize donors will be contacted over the next few days.

Thankyou for your participation. :)

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<salshep> <ordie>I should wite something awsome
<salshep> It's true
<ordie> You're write. That's my one-size-fits-all reort.

#Cabal. Because someone needs to be.
Lovely piece. I really like the images. They're cold and minimal, and I agree with others, this is a wonderful format. Congrats on third place! :D

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~jamberry-song - words and whispers, the poet's eye on the universe.
*jamberry - elves, knights and nature, the artist's half of the brain.

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